masias
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Post by masias on May 15, 2006 13:52:12 GMT -5
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Post by Bloodz4life on May 15, 2006 14:11:00 GMT -5
hmm......well tha shit was ok i couldnet really get a hold of anything
and u need more than 1 verse but it was iight
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doobie
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Post by doobie on May 17, 2006 9:33:20 GMT -5
Ok let me say what I think....
Ok it was alright but I found in places you slur allot, hard to understand
I find with fast tracks the best thing too do is not always go that extra edge to fast
Makesure when you rapping ever line every word is that that clear so the views
can enjoy it, I find the odd slur word is cool I mean it shows your diffrence in voice
but keep it at a cool level... anyway uno the rest homes nice drop anyhow... props
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masias
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Post by masias on May 18, 2006 9:32:51 GMT -5
word^^ thanks. thats the type of advice that everyone needs. I think Ima use that as an example for good feed. thanx man. aight. uppin.
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btown
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Post by btown on May 18, 2006 13:17:38 GMT -5
hmmm......i know ive heard that beat.....i think i downloaded it off soundclick or something but i got rid of it
yea doobie had a point that you slur sometimes, but i cant criticize cuz i do that shit too
the flow was pretty good wit the beat, and in some places the vocals sounded a bit choppy
i was feelin this though
only thing i dont like is how after your verse it just runs out for like 2 minutes of just the beat lol
unless you did that so other people could hop on the track
but anyways
good shit i was feelin it
props
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masias
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Post by masias on May 24, 2006 7:36:57 GMT -5
word^^^ Uppin
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